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Naruto sat in his bedroom. His mind heavy with thought. “This is nuts” he laughed. “I love Sakura there is no doubt about it!” He yelled happily. “I love Sakura right?” he asked himself. He didn’t know himself anymore. It had been 1 month since Sasuke gave his body to Orochimaru. And Naruto almost got killed by Orochimaru when he went to his lair. He had woke up in hospital. Sakura and her friend Ino were the only two who came to visit him.

It was then he realised how beautiful Ino was. That was what was wrong with him right now. “Ino or Sakura.” Then there was a knock on the door. “Hello” said Naruto opening the door. “Hi Naruto.” There was a girl there she had her long blonde hair in a long pony tail, she wore a purple vest and skirt, and bright green eyes. “Hi Ino-Chan what are you doing here?” “I just wanted to talk to you.” She stepped in. “You like Sakura don’t you?” She asked. “I don’t know anymore.” Ino looked shocked at him. “Well she is going out with lee now.” Naruto looked horrified.

“Since when!” Naruto asked. “Yesterday.” Answered Ino with a sad look on her face. “What is wrong Ino-Chan?” “I think I.” She stopped and looked embarrassed. “You think what?” Naruto asked confused.” I think I love you Naruto.” She yelled. “What?!” Naruto asked shocked as she pulled him in for a kiss. There lips met it felt amazing. At first Naruto was nervous but soon he realised he loved her too   
A Naruino fic I wrote XD it sucks
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Blahking69 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
Did lee and Sakura do 69??
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Boom-Lay-Boom Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
For a short little oneshot, it's great! Not really the types of fanfictions I read, but all in all, it's great
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samhan91 Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
Ino Has Blue Eye's Baka
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sagenaruto33 Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Student Artist
Good job
Inner: that sucked
Who asked u
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2ndDemension Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012
to short for me and can use a better plot but other than that it was good
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denyceuchiha121398 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011
aww...I think it's cute!
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Eziotehwomanizer Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
lol it doesn't suck, but it would be nice to write a bit more maybe?
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walkalone14 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011
it dont suck u should write more naruino
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:iconnaruino123:
naruino123 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011
I LOVE IT
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:iconrenhand:
renhand Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010
wow thats a great story im with the other two i hate sakulee ehhh its just so creepy
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SarahChan96 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2010
SWEEEEEET!!!~ I like love it.
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NBDH15 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010
aww
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MusicMonkey17 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2010
Just realized much I love NaruIno. Been going through pictures and fan fiction like crazy. Very nice by teh way, but it is short. But I must say, I hate SakuraxLee. It's just creepy O_o
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Kat-7 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
same....sakuraXlee freaks me out...i keep picturin what the kids would be like....he girls are ESPECIALLY freaky!!! *shudders*
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rex1234321 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009
this was an asume starte
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:iconomally-dood:
omally-dood Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2009
nice beginning 2 bad there isn't more i would love 2 read it if there was =(
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InoYamanaka246 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2009
dats so cute.. :3
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evilncutebunni2 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2009
NaruIno is much better than NaruHina. Good job on the story.
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KingCairo Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
too much mushy,not enough smex. still pretty good,though
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Maximus1900 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2008  Hobbyist
You are right. That story DID suck
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Minato650 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2008
How do you post a short story as a deviation?
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Kawaii-AnimePrincess Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2008
CUTE! :D
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sorawillrocku Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2008
OMFG!!!!!! :iconiloveyouplz: awsome
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KONY212 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2008
DUDE BEST FAN FICTION OF NARUINO EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!BETTER THEN MINE I WROTE HAVENT POSTED IT YET
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Narutosgirl8 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2008
Awwwww....
Thats so cute! I love NaruIno even if it is a crack pairing!<3
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Darkfirewolf2 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2008
its good but it needs to be longer....in my fanfic i have Inos daughter with my OC Shadow, Naruto and Hinatas adopted son. (not sure why im telling this but o well INO IS HOT! but i liked how she looked before time skip. After.....not so hot."
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MeanAngel45 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2008
Don't say it sucks, I love it! Fav! :D Keep up the good work!
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oturan123456 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2008
awsome
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Archangel4282 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2008
For not having enough length for a plot, you have a good idea. Now just expand on it. Before, after, during. Details! We demand details!
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boochata14 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008
wow that did suck.
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Gaia-wolf Featured By Owner May 2, 2008
oy you got nutin goood to say say nuthin at all
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anime-squirreil Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2008
i should hurt you for not making it longer grrr
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Skinnyman-02 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2008
*Vast grammatical errors.
*Too simple of a plot.
*Too dang short.
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narutofangirl102 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2008
This is great! i love Naruto-kun and Ino!
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Inugame1618 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2008
i :love: it! it's soo cute! did u maake the other one?
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biganime40 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007
i luv NAruHina tere #1 for me
i like NaruIno tere #2
im ok wit Naru/anything but i feel a little distered wit narusasu because naruto is on da buttom all da time imean naruto iz a demon and sasuke is just a human wit red eyes dat all.DANI!!!!sorry it just pissies me off dat all if u tink da same wit narusasu plese reply.dani!
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(o.o)dani!!!!
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that dosent kill me
can only make me stronger
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Otacon144 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2007  Student Filmographer
Hey, everybody has to start somewhere.

Keep practicing. :)
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:iconjtmann:
Jtmann Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2007
too short too boring
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Gaia-wolf Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2007
if u dnt like thn dnt read it ffs
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Skinnyman-02 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2008
We all have to read it before we give our opinion on it. Not everyone is going to absolutley adore this.
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naruto728 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2007
i lovvvvvvvvve naruhina naruino very close second because of this
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pyledryver Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2007
naruino, never happening... EVER
narusaku, very, very unlikely

(naruhina/PATIENTLOVE 4ever)
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Gaia-wolf Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2007
thats your opinion if you can't think of a nice comment to send me you can just fuck off
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bc34 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2007
this is really good naruino is an great couple
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Gaia-wolf Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2007
thanks
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WVmallmaniac Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2007
:heart:I Luv it but I like Ino and Neji together!!!:heart:
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Gaia-wolf Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2007
thanks
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blackspice Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2007  Student
awww it doesn't suck
i love it!
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Katomair1 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2007
I think they are good together! Buts it short*tear* buts its so cute.....
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Edwardthepipsqueak Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2007
i liked it! very cute^_^
though im not so much liking the whole lee/sakura part....im a total sasusaku and naruino fan so yea....
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