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*flashback*

“brother?” Sasuke asked Itachi who was writing. “hm?” Itachi answered. “could you take me to the hill please?” Sasuke asked. “why” Itachi answered. “cause I wanna see the sunset!” Sasuke asked. “can’t father do it?” Itachi asked. “please!!” Sasuke chirped
. Itachi smiled “put your sandals on” he answered. Sasuke smiled and did as his brother asked. They went outside and walked up to the top of the hill. The sunset was there it was the most beautiful thing Sasuke had ever seen. “It is so pretty” Sasuke yelled. Itachi smiled. “Will I ever grow as strong as you brother!” Sasuke asked. Itachi looked down and smiled “of course you will.” He answered. Sasuke hugged his brother.

*End of flashback*

Uchiha Sasuke now 13 years old was walking through Konoha “It’s not too late” He thought. He picked up his pace and darted to his unknown location. Soon he reached a large hill just behind the ghost town which was the home of the Uchiha clan. “He looked down at the Uchiha compound a single tear fell.

*flashback*

“Why brother why did you kill them!” Sasuke yelled “To test the limits of my power” He answered coldly. “That’s it you killed them all for that!” Sasuke answered back. “It was necessary.” Itachi answered. “Necessary it was necessary to slaughter our whole family! You bastard!!” Sasuke screamed. “Don’t fuck with me!!” Sasuke yelled charging his brother. Itachi punched Sasuke in the stomach and Sasuke fell to the ground.

*end of flashback*

Sasuke watched the sunset. “brother” he said in a whisper. Sakura was taking a walk when she saw Sasuke at the top of the hill. “Wonder what Sasuke is doing up there.” She thought. Sakura climbed the hill. She hid behind a rock only to hear Sasuke crying. She came out “Sasuke?” she asked. “oh leave me alone!” He yelled. “Sasuke please what’s the matter.” she asked sadly. He looked at her and said “I miss my mummy and daddy.” Those were two words Sakura thought she would never hear form him. “Sasuke I’m sorry!” She ran and hugged him tight.

They sat and held each other for a while. Before Sakura realised she had to go home. “Sasuke I have to go I’m sorry.” she said. “let me walk you” He answered. “ok” she said. The two walked down the hill an saw the gates. Sasuke froze and stared at the gates. He shook with fear. He began to remember that night he fell to the floor. “why why WHY!!!!!!!!!” He screamed. “Sasuke it’s all right Sakura hugged him. “I loved them I trusted him why why did he betray me!” he yelled “I don’t know Sasuke.” He stood and said “lets go inside.” he murmured. “if you want to.” She whispered.

The pushed open the gates. A dark shadow covered the entire town. “This place is creepy.” Sakura said. They walked to Sasuke’s house. “This is it” Sasuke muttered. He pushed open the door. Sasuke led Sakura to his old room. “Sasuke I love you” she whispered. “I know” he whispered. They both laid down on his bed and went to sleep. In the morning Sakura woke up feeling a warm touch on her face. It was Sasuke’s hand on her face. He was sound asleep. “wake up Sasuke” she whispered.

The dark haired boy awoke and smiled “hi” he whispered. “I best go home” she murmured. “Ok I will take you.” They  walked out of the Uchiha town and walked to Sakura’s house. “bye Sasuke” she whispered. All of a sudden he pulled her to him and kissed her lips gently. “Sasuke” she thought. They pulled apart after 10 seconds. “goodbye” he said softly. As she turned away and entered her home he smiled “I love you he thought.
©2007-2010 ~Gaia-wolf
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I saw the sunset last night and thought of this :)

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:iconvalval926:
awwwwwwwwwwwwww it was i wuved it ur da bomb [snif sniff ] itt was good it made me cry sniff

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ya trick ya the dawn is my enemy cha?!
:iconsasuke4eva619:
That was pretty cute ^^ but maybe idk edit it some more y'know?


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:iconcuteneko-chan:
SO ADORABLE!!!!!!!!!!!

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Neko mimi
Neko mimi mo-do
Neko mimi mo-do desu

Unya~
Unyanya
Unya~n

Furufuru, furumu-n!

Oniisama

Ya ku so ku yo

Atashi no shimobe~

KISS, shitakunachatta
:iconsakura45hinata:
awww so cute

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I'm in love with a fairytale
Even though it hurts.
'Cause I don't care if I lose my mind
I'm already cursed.

SasuSaku:heart:Jacob Black
:icontwilight-sakura:
awwww" i miss my mummy and daddy" thas the best part ^^
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Kl but dude! Everytime a new person speakes you must start a new paragraph! Also instead of flash back you could have included into the story such as... "Sasuke sat peacfully and drifted into his memories!" Otherwise a good improvement!

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"Trust No One More Than Yourself"

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Aww, how sweet! :aww:

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When you have to kill a man, it costs nothing to be polite. Sir Winston Churchill (1874-1965)

I clain Zelos Wilder in ~bishie-stalker-club

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